You are hitting the right notes for me Harold. The spot that didn't reach me or fit for me was the complexity message and slide. Neat picture but the point you are making seemed a bit flat. Complexity is an important theme. Maybe add one more slide that opens up why it's important i.e. emergent solutions, relations, small pieces connecting to unexpectedly resolve large problems etc.

I so like your shock cartoon using Hugh's art. The inverted pyramid model speaks volumes, I like that one and the hierarchy one a lot. Very simple but very powerful.

The conversation slide is a bit flat for me as well. Conversation is integral to your presentation but it's such a commonly used word especially in the social media sphere. When you say deeper conversations - maybe something there can be said that brings out conversation more in the way you meant it to mean?

I've said more than I intended. Your writing and work is helping me a lot Harold. Thanks!

Looking forward to seeing your finished product.

Brent MacKinnon